Much thanks to J Hardy for hosting this amazing challenge of What Pegman’s Saw. This week, we’re off to Chechnya Russia.

When You’re Gone
An icy spell hovered by the clouds,
With nothing but snow all around,
Hamza dragged his boots into the snow,
He didn’t know what to do, or where to go,
He wore nothing to make him warm,
Only dark thoughts swam
Round his mind, only darkness lingered.
His heart felt more frozen than his limbs,
His mind felt more numb than his fingers.
He looked into the skies,
Drew back, a sigh,
And whispered into the air,
The words no-one could hear,
“When you’re gone, my world feels more bleak
Than all the winters at peek,
My heart has dried like all these leafless trees,
And I won’t mourn if one day I shall freeze
For when you’re gone,
I’m all alone,
No beauty is appealing,
No cure is healing,
No bird seems to sing,
For my darling, you, and only you, is my spring.”
That’s sweet π
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Thank you so much π
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Very lovely poem dear!!,πΉ
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Thank you so much!! π
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Welcome!!π
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That is beautifully written Sophie!ππΊ
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Thank you so much Steve!! β€ How are you?
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Hi Sophie! Slowly getting better, thank you! How are you these days?ππΊππ»
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Awesome poem!
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Thank you so much π
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Very sweet poem
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Thank you so much β€
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Awe! I love it! πππΌ
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Thank you sooo much β€
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Without the beloved, winter reigns.
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True, thank you so much for reading π
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Moving poem! I like the photo, too
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Excellent word flow that expresses so much. Beautiful!
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Oh, thank you so much β€ π
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Atmospheric. Shivered though the sun is shining
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Thank you so much β€
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Your words really breathe life into what could have been a humdrum image. Magical!
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Oh, thank you so much, your comment made my day β€
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