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Tune
By the old, curtains of the abandoned mansion, the two boy cousins could see the flaming rays of the dying sun kissing the summer mist.
The older boy, smarter and colder of the two, and a former bully, whispered coldly, “Still enemies but, gon’ work together, ‘kay?”
The younger one, timid and bullied, didn’t reply.
Instead, a soft piano tune played.
“Ain’t …” the older trailed off as his eyes went to the clock. Running backward.
Again the tune. Soft and haunting.
This time, the older gasped at the other, horrified. Whenever the younger talked only a soft tune played.
Den of Dreams 
Spoo-kee!
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Thank-ee 😄
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Wonderfully creepy 🙂
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Thank you so much
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Ooooohhhh… what is going on in there?
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Something I don’t know yet (: Thank you so much for reading!
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Wow. Different, not what I was expecting….
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Oh, thank you so much!
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🙂
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This is very eerie!
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Thanks!
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Not any abandoned place I’d want to be near!
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Me as well, but my poor characters can’t choose haha *evil laughter*. Thank you so much for reading
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lol You’re very welcome.
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oooooooooooooh! Spookilicious!
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Thank you!
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I think the bully might become the bullied. Poetic justice. 😀
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderfully peculiar, like it
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Thank you (:
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Oh, this is creepy! Nice one.
Here’s mine!
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Thank you so much.
And I read it, it’s great!
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Spooky justice is the most poetic 🙂 Very imaginative take!
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😀 Thank you so much
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Very spooky.
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Thank you so much for reading
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Tres creepy! I almost–not quite, but almost–feel sorry for the bully. May all bullies get what they deserve!
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Thank you so much for reading, and Ryu (that’s the bully’s name) secretly smiles for your empathy. (:
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I finished going “Ohh!” definitely spooky, I love it.
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Thank you so much (:
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Oh, that was spooky. I enjoyed it!
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Thank you so much!
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A great piece of flash writing, setting the reader up to wonder, and indeed hear more. Nicely done
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Thank you so much!!
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Oooo, I love the twist at the end! So haunting!
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Oh, thank you so much!!
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