A big thank you to Sammi for hosting this challenge. Here’s my take on it.
Though I try
To rectify
My mistakes—
To lower those stakes
Built for years
In endless spheres
“Better late than never” they say,
“If there’s a will, there’s a way”
But I’m stuck in dead-end.
I know doesn’t make me much sense, but it’s written from the point of view of my imaginary friend, Yhorri (there, I drew him)
Thank you so much for reading and have a great weekend ahead~
‘Built for years
In endless spheres’ was such a great line. I really liked this short poem! And the sketch looks pretty good too!
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Ah, thank you so much ❤
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Of course!❤️
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I like the sketch of Yhorri very much. The words seem very much what he would say when frustrated.
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Thank you so much, it means a lot to me~!
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The pleasure is mine!
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🙂 ❤
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On the contrary. It makes good sense to me.
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On behalf of Yhorri, I thank you for reading all the vanished words.
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Pleasure, you know that
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Honestly, I’m really grateful to you for your support (:
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You deserve support. And I like you
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Honestly, this means a lot to me. Thank you so much, it just made my day…
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🤗🧡🌞
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Dear D.W.
It makes perfect sense to me. And how true is “better late than never?” How well I relate to that.;)
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ah, from Yhorri’s side, I thank you for reading this and I’m glad yet sorry you found this relatable. May things turn better for you, and thank you again.
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It is sad, but life often is. Nicely done.
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I guess so, thank you so much for reading.
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Love the lines “Built for years, In endless spheres” 💜
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Thank you so much~
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My pleasure, DW ☺️
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Ohh 🙂 Have a great Sunday ahead 🙂
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I have to agree with everyone. Very well done!
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Thank you so much~
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Reading the notes on Yhorri, the poem makes perfect sense. And what a soulful sketch of him. He sounds like he’d make a sweet friend. 💖
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Thank you so much, it means really a lot to me 😌 Yhorri is one of my favourite characters of my stories and your views on him just make me so happy, thank you ~ °♡°
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this was an interesting poem – and drawing! also i’ve nominated you for the liebster award @ https://sarafowall.wordpress.com/2020/09/19/award-saturday-aka-all-liebster-awards/ have a wonderful day!
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Thank you so much 🙂 And ooh, that’s really cool, a big thank you to you~ °♡°
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of course! ❤
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